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Sep 23 2006, 10:33 AM EDT
Anonymous
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me feet on nothing but air
nothing but blackness surrounds me
despair has taken over me.
-Ariel Cambridge
http://thousandmoments.wetpaint.com/
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would you like to dance?dance not with swirling feetbut in dazzling wordswould you like to dance under the starsnot hidden by the cloudsbut
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Jun 23 2006, 1:20 AM EDT
Anonymous
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author: CrankyPants
ResponseThe second poem needs some polish. It starts with a nice idea. I like the idea of making the night part of your life. But the poem needs a second pass to tighen it up a bit in the word flow. anyone care to take a shot?
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Jun 23 2006, 1:19 AM EDT
Anonymous
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dreams...-----------------------------------------
Response
The second poem needs some polish. It starts with a nice idea. I like the idea of making the night part of your life. But the poem needs a second pass to tighen it up a bit in the word flow. anyone care to take a shot?
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Jun 19 2006, 11:01 PM EDT
CrankyPants
a response
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dance crazy, the taste of love
buckling under the weight
of life
give me all your glee
groping under the stars
Don't just feel right
take what's yours
Don't just take chances
grab the love from above
fucking under the night
of life
give me all that's free
shining
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Jun 1 2006, 11:59 PM EDT
CKochmer
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and
you
interweaving
like
to
dance
?
dance not
with
our
swirling
souls
feet
but in dazzling words
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would you like to dance under the stars
not hidden by the clouds
A
but
poetry
shining
hitching
in
post
our
have
dreams...
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Casey
at
Kochmer
it
:
:)
2001
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Jun 1 2006, 11:53 PM EDT
CKochmer
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Renamed from Poetry Hitching Post by
CKochmer
Jun 1 2006, 11:53 PM EDT for: Rename
Jun 1 2006, 11:48 PM EDT
CKochmer
just flowing to the idea
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Renamed from Poetry by
CKochmer
Jun 1 2006, 11:48 PM EDT for: just flowing to the idea
Jun 1 2006, 11:47 PM EDT
CKochmer
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Rare people become as poems
tangling and interweaving
with our souls
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A poetry hitching post have at it :)
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Jun 1 2006, 11:43 PM EDT
Anonymous
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Created by Anonymous Jun 1 2006, 11:43 PM EDT for: no reason given
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