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	Date/Time	Made By	Edit Note	Type	Scope
	Sep 23 2006, 10:33 AM EDT	Anonymous		edit	66 words added 1 word deleted
Change: me feet on nothing but air nothing but blackness surrounds me despair has taken over me. -Ariel Cambridge http://thousandmoments.wetpaint.com/ -----------------------------------------------would you like to dance?dance not with swirling feetbut in dazzling wordswould you like to dance under the starsnot hidden by the cloudsbut View changes from previous version. (Word count: 227)
	Jun 23 2006, 1:20 AM EDT	Anonymous		edit	2 words added
Change: author: CrankyPantsResponseThe second poem needs some polish. It starts with a nice idea. I like the idea of making the night part of your life. But the poem needs a second pass to tighen it up a bit in the word flow. anyone care to take a shot? View changes from previous version. (Word count: 161)
	Jun 23 2006, 1:19 AM EDT	Anonymous		edit	48 words added
Change: dreams...-----------------------------------------ResponseThe second poem needs some polish. It starts with a nice idea. I like the idea of making the night part of your life. But the poem needs a second pass to tighen it up a bit in the word flow. anyone care to take a shot? View changes from previous version. (Word count: 159)
	Jun 19 2006, 11:01 PM EDT	CrankyPants	a response	edit	65 words added
Change: dance crazy, the taste of lovebuckling under the weightof lifegive me all your gleegroping under the starsDon't just feel righttake what's yoursDon't just take chancesgrab the love from abovefucking under the nightof lifegive me all that's freeshining View changes from previous version. (Word count: 111)
	Jun 1 2006, 11:59 PM EDT	CKochmer		edit	43 words added 19 words deleted
Change: andyou interweavinglike to dance?dance not with ourswirling soulsfeetbut in dazzling words----------------------------------would you like to dance under the starsnot hidden by the cloudsAbut poetryshining hitchingin postour havedreams...------------------------------------------Casey atKochmer it: :)2001 View changes from previous version. (Word count: 41)
	Jun 1 2006, 11:53 PM EDT	CKochmer	Rename	rename	No content added or deleted.
Change: Renamed from Poetry Hitching Post by CKochmer Jun 1 2006, 11:53 PM EDT for: Rename
	Jun 1 2006, 11:48 PM EDT	CKochmer	just flowing to the idea	rename	No content added or deleted.
Change: Renamed from Poetry by CKochmer Jun 1 2006, 11:48 PM EDT for: just flowing to the idea
	Jun 1 2006, 11:47 PM EDT	CKochmer		edit	20 words added
Change: Rare people become as poems tangling and interweaving with our souls----------------------------------A poetry hitching post have at it :) View changes from previous version. (Word count: 18)
	Jun 1 2006, 11:43 PM EDT	Anonymous		create	No content added or deleted.
Change: Created by Anonymous Jun 1 2006, 11:43 PM EDT for: no reason given

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